a note to the reader

Dear reader I would like for you to take a look at my cat in the hat and take a look at my transitions and green sentences. I feel as though my essay has no grammatical eerors and that most of my transitions fit with what I'm trying to say but it dosen't hurt to have a little criticism every now and then so if you don't mind I would like for you to make some comments so that I can see what I need to improve on.